Making Plans Poem by Daniel Brick

Making Plans

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for Anne and Those She Loves

What is the use of making plans?
A contemporary Ecclesiastes
will shake his head and rail
against the vanity of pitting
desires against time. Here's how
I see it: today, you finish
dreaming of a future shaped
by your plans, each mioment
settled in its proper place
and a mantle of satisfaction
spread over everyone you involve.
Then tomorrow arrives with no stake
in your happiness, no awareness
of your perfect plans, and dire events
tumble forth - an illnesss, a postponed
reunion, a death in the family, forgotten
promises. There will be no end
to the spoilage of hope, and time will
mock your plans with sour laughter.
So I repeat: What is the use of making plans?

This bowl of lies was my mind last week.
Then I read the message you sent me,
and you had silenced Ecclesiastes
and lifted my mood. Oh, the calm
certainty of your imagined future!
With LOVE the center around your plans
orbit... It is the man in your heart
of hearts, whose embrace measures the boundless
contours of the world you two share, the soil
in which your plans flower to maturity. It is
the children you teach, who love you like
a big sister, your second family outside of home.
It is your friends, who face the same future
as you with their plans gilded with hope.
It is your country, under the ever renewed
mandate of heaven, on the cusp of new greatness.

You see how your faith has inspired mine,
I am infected with your hope and rejoice
in this ideal sickness. I see clearly now
the use of making plans, because nothing
which is not planned can be loved, and
nothing that is not loved can become real.

Thursday, March 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: future,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 02 March 2017

Infected with hope and rejoice- - Thanks for sharing.

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Pamela Sinicrope 02 March 2017

I'm glad Anne was able to infuse you with the ideal sickness! I hope you both make your plans real. All the best! :)

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Anne Yun 02 March 2017

Thank you very much, dearest Daniel. I will always remember your words and stick to my plans.

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Bill Cantrell 02 March 2017

A truly wonderful poem! Infected Hope birthed by another's faith.

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Nosheen Irfan 02 March 2017

Nothing which is not planned can be loved, and nothing that is not loved can become real. So wisely put. An amazing philosophy of life. Though the mean plots of destiny and irony of life often turn us into pessimists but looking forward to the future and planning your life with optimism and enthusiasm is so necessary to live a happy contented life. Hope is what sustains life. Though a cynic might raise eyebrows here but i agree with you. We don't know what future holds for us but planning about it gives meaning to our existence. A wonderful write with a great message. A10.

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