Man In The Moon
Come hail or rain or sleet or snow
outside is the place I'll always go
to look above the sky at night
to tell the moon and man my plight
My eldest child will always know
the promise I made a long time ago
for if I'm near or far away
the man in the moon will always convey
My love for you will never fade
and every time you glance his way
remember dad sends his love your way.
This is very beautiful, Annette and so movingly written. One of your best. Tom
so, you wrote the poem from the perspective of your dad? your dad was John White, and this was his promise to you, his eldest child: My love for you will never fade................right? very nice. i wonder how often you see the moon and think of him. to MyPoemList. bri :)
My love for you will never fade and every time you glance his way remember dad sends his love your way. when i read these lines i had mixed feelings in me evoking sadness and joy at once. beautiful line dear Annette.thank you
Come hail or rain or sleet or snow outside is the place I'll always go to look above the sky at night to tell the moon and man my plight' beautiful and the moon listens with serene silent beauty
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice, I think it's cool you write poems like this for others, I find myself doing the same thing, the joy another gets is so worth any effort, thanks for posting.