Mankind In Danger Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.
Mankind In Danger
I have this question so many time,
That why our loves cause the dirty crime?
And this is because of the forgotten past?
Which was full of savage and didn't last
It seems that we didn't get any lesson,
While we make the tanks and the atomic missiles
Missiles doesn't rhythme good, I know
But how can the humanity be saved, how?
World, hear this, the Middle East is not a battlefield,
That all the time there are the sounds of bombs and these things.
Things don't rhythme good, I know,
But how can the humanity be saved, how?
I don't know how the voice of an explosion is, but I heard the voice of AK 47 and a clot,
For sure the sound of it is more worse than a slamming door
Door doesn't rhythme good, I know,
What is the solution for now?
Is the solution war?
The humans have taste this so far
Or that black material that is called oil?
Look at the people's blood that is soiled!
Or that place that I don't like to even call its name is behind the scene?
That place that now is surrounding Palestine with so much sin…
Where are the messenger of peace?
Where the angels who cure the children with a kiss?
If war is sweet, why do we eat chocolates?
We can eat war, we can make it our mate…
Kann ich bitte ein program haben?
Bedaure, es ist alles ausverkauf!
Yeah, the show is just started,
But the tickets are deducted!
Who are the players of this play?
Who likes to destroy the ** buds of May**?
The answer will be said soon,
If the humanity got the holes of destroying like the moon….
Human kind needs peace……needs real liberty…needs truth……
(lines in German mean: can you please give me the time of the show?
sorry, the tickets are all sold.
the marked one is somehow taken from William sonnet.
to the peace...................to the humanity................to the awaken people of this globe
E.A
A well crafted piece, love the form and the sentiment.
really really perfect! i love the subjects of ur poems...it's a particular poem...thank u...thank u...and...hey! ! i'm a fan of u: D
i'm pretty sure you mean glock, not clot; get your mind off of medical subjects, my friend! angles who cure the children with a kiss? ...i know you mean to write angels; i've seen this mistake before somewhere. darn old language! and you only gave first name of w.s.; maybe that was meant and is sufficient. i like when you have trouble rhyming (i guess) and write something like this: Missiles doesn't rhythm good, I know But how can the humanity be saved, how? HEY! i just noticed you wrote rhythm. i thought it was rhyme. i sometimes have trouble finding a good rhyme and then i explain that to the reader as you have done. but i MUST point out: although know and now(or how) are almost identical in spelling, to me they don't rhyme so well. maybe you didn't really mean for them to rhyme so well. it is good anyway. thanks for sharing. i could say more but am pressed for time and have said enough anyway for this nice poem. bri p.s. i especially like the line: If the humanity got the holes of destroying like the moon….
a nice poem about peace and humanity peace must be realized within and amplified then comes out to fulfil the realization/ war is not a solution yet we go and chose the war and what we do ..kill the human kind the best creation by Allah you know war I call it W=walk A =aggressively and R=rape the humanity/the line which you wrote gave me a bit blurriness Who likes to destroy the ** buds of May**? thought about the women the roses...well work and I appreciate and accept the universal call thank you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 2:06:57 AM # 1.0.0.1119
nice, maybe u r touched by the war against syria.