Feel Of Trust Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

Feel Of Trust

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What is the feel of trust?
You can find the answer in the dust

When you are lost in the dust in a land,
You will see something soothing that is coming for you, it’s a hand

Will you take it or not?
While the weather is going too hot

Feel of trust is an important thing,
It will help the nations and kings

Trust in your friends, as you trust in your eyes,
But try to understand the true lies

Trust makes us to start,
But the wrong trust makes us far a part

So let's start trusting……

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Feel of trust and trusting is so important, so we should really believe each other in every aspects, if we don't trust others, so lets trust our close friends, with out the feel of trust, we can't find friends all over the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 09 June 2013

Without trust how can there be friendship? So we have to trust people

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Nader Baheri 12 June 2013

great subjet you have chosen to versify. we must be careful.some times wolves in ships'clothing try to shake hands.so shall we trust or cut their hands either a woman or a man.yes i totally agree at the end. we should throw these paranoid thoughts away to make this world more beatiful.~nb

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Unwritten Soul 12 June 2013

Without trust we can stay living, because it trust who makes people giving....so dont break the trust that we have..and love is keeping and staying, in this life for you...love it my dear lil quack_Soul

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 12 June 2013

life is to believe, whatever the cost when we lose the trust we have lost our lives good poem and good subject thank for sharing

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 December 2015

The truth is all about life! ! So, we need he truth always. Nice work.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 29 December 2015

thank you so much for the time you've donated to read my poem, i do appreciate it, Sir. :)

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Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2013

To receive trust you must first earn it. When that is accomplished there is no limit on trust. Feeling trust is a good feeling, and when we lose it that feeling goes away and we refuse to trust again lest we be hurt. It's part of human nature and we all have to work at it or not. Good insight. Keep writing. RoseAnn

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Kelvin Owusu 17 June 2013

to start trust some must begin with first forgiving, a nice piece

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Ramesh Rai 16 June 2013

always trust other why not u r being cheated then only you can get your real frnd. never stop writing

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Hmmm...true words...but at d same time we must be careful of black-angels

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

Iran, Islamic republic of
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