Crystal Pierce

Marching Forward - Poem by Crystal Pierce

You first hear the snare and bass drum,
then later comes a hum.
A sympathy of winds
and softer sounds chiming in.

Marching forward as we go.
When we'll stop playing no one knows.
We just keep on
playing our song.

The Marching Band
This is my clan!

Topic(s) of this poem: marching

Comments about Marching Forward by Crystal Pierce

  • Hans Vr (11/6/2015 7:45:00 AM)

    Yes! An enthusiastic yes rang in my mind upon reading this poem. Marching forward, bit by bit, step by step. With some good principles in the heart and a reflective mind, we can make a bit of progress every single day. Kaizen in action. A giant attitude, very poetically expressed in fluent lines.Excellent! (Report) Reply

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  • Bri Edwards (10/28/2015 10:20:00 PM)

    nice work for 14 years old. good effort with rhyming. sometimes more 'perfect rhyming' can make a poem suffer if the poet is paying more attention to rhyming than to the 'story' and to making it enjoyable for the readers.

    I've sent some suggestions etc. via a message.

    my favorite lines:

    The Marching Band
    This is my clan!

    thanks for sharing. bri :)
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 26, 2015

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