Medical Mistake Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

Medical Mistake

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I call you savior when you save the lives of thousands,
I call you murderer when you carry death in your hands.

Some people are so afraid to go to your hospital,
Some people are begged to leave your locale.

I used to believe that you are respected,
Your mistake made your patient depressed.

You tell me that you were stressful,
Your reply doesn't fit with our principal.

You are highly educated and graduated,
Now, You are obviously ignored and insulted.

You used try getting better bank account increased,
By sucking the patient blood, your image decreased.

I thought that you work for healing,
You are successful in just stealing.

Medical Mistake
Friday, February 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,doctor,healing,health,hospital,life,mistake,money
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 22 February 2016

You are really right! There are much problems at the hospitals. Great work!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 22 February 2016

Thank you for reading Mr.Edward. Thank you for taking time to write this great comment.

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Driss Ezzireg 20 February 2016

A very profound and interesting poem about a phenomenon that is unfortunately recurrent nowadays.Thanks for sharing.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 20 February 2016

Thank you si Driss for reading. I enjoyed with your comment.

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M Asim Nehal 20 February 2016

After all they are also humans, greedy, selfish, and all other negative traits of which they are not untouched yet they are expert to deal in such situation where all hopes dies. Black sheeps are everywhere.........10

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Abderrahmane Dakir 20 February 2016

Thank you for reading. I enjoyed with your comment.

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Valsa George 20 February 2016

A doctor can give life to many. But because of his negligence, some might even lose their lives! A fatal mistake from the part of a doctor is never excused. It will tarnish his image and popularity! A doctor shouldn't be driven by mercenary interests, he should be driven more by compassion! No other interest should be allowed to over ride his responsibility to patients! A fine write with a great message!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 20 February 2016

Thank you for reading. I like your comment so much.

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