Your smile invites our
Thoughts to relax within your sight,
Troubles to melt in your path,
Senses to mesmerize in your eyes,
Issues to solve upon your ways,
Feelings to excite by your voice,
Worries to dissolve into your waves.
Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery,
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library,
Improve our skills in major literary,
Expand our essay to a well-read story,
Find our love poetry.
Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness,
Darkness to Lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness,
Sadness to Happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths,
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness,
Awkwardness to smoothness,
Selfishness to selflessness.
Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest,
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet,
Brightly achieve any tough feat,
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith,
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait,
Forget our last defeat,
Truly have sensation we never felt,
Ultimately succeed all our tests,
Deserve all our gifts.
Your smile is single and individual subject where as object appears to be universal. This reflects the contradiction arising out of evolution. A mesmerizing sketch has been drawn by your ink where fountain of love is springing perpetually. Thanks for sharing.
Rich flow of thoughts embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful portrayal of the essence and intricacies of loved-one's smile written with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.
Your smile helps us to Follow our passion of discovery, Seek our desire in priceless treasury, Your smile changes our Loneliness to togetherness, Darkness to Lightness, simply beautiful with a passing graphic of the smiling woman.... just fine and gives real inner comfort for the reader. you are spreading smiles all over in this sad world dear poet. thank you. tony
Bursting with a beauty that is both refreshing and rich! Well done my friend!
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I would like to translate this poem
Awesome poem, written with great passion.