Your Smile Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

Your Smile

Rating: 4.7


Your smile invites our
Thoughts to relax within your sight,
Troubles to melt in your path,
Senses to mesmerize in your eyes,
Issues to solve upon your ways,
Feelings to excite by your voice,
Worries to dissolve into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery,
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library,
Improve our skills in major literary,
Expand our essay to a well-read story,
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness,
Darkness to Lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness,
Sadness to Happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths,
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness,
Awkwardness to smoothness,
Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest,
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet,
Brightly achieve any tough feat,
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith,
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait,
Forget our last defeat,
Truly have sensation we never felt,
Ultimately succeed all our tests,
Deserve all our gifts.

Your Smile
Saturday, December 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: face,girl,love,love and friendship,romance,romantic,smile,smiling
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 18 January 2016

Awesome poem, written with great passion.

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Ramesh Rai 21 September 2018

Your smile is single and individual subject where as object appears to be universal. This reflects the contradiction arising out of evolution. A mesmerizing sketch has been drawn by your ink where fountain of love is springing perpetually. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 20 February 2018

Rich flow of thoughts embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful portrayal of the essence and intricacies of loved-one's smile written with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 22 February 2018

Thanks for reading. I appreciate it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 June 2017

Your smile helps us to Follow our passion of discovery, Seek our desire in priceless treasury, Your smile changes our Loneliness to togetherness, Darkness to Lightness, simply beautiful with a passing graphic of the smiling woman.... just fine and gives real inner comfort for the reader. you are spreading smiles all over in this sad world dear poet. thank you. tony

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Thank you Dr.Tony for your amazing review.

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Mohammad Skati 04 February 2016

It is a true and wonderful poem. I loved it. Thanks.

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Thank you for your wonderful review.

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Bursting with a beauty that is both refreshing and rich! Well done my friend!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 03 February 2016

Thank for your bursting comment.

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