My Friend Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

My Friend

Rating: 4.7


If you want to hear their laughter,
Keep a distance from your lover.

If you want to strengthen your character,
Don't tell your sorrow to other.

Keep your problems in you,
No one could solve your issue.

Take care for your enemy,
But don't trust anybody.

Don't promise when you are glad,
Don't decide when you are sad.

If you want to win more friends,
Keep your smile on your face.

My Friend
Wednesday, January 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: smile,friend,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 25 January 2016

Very nice and practical points given in this poem. It is full of wise words and there is a lot of truth in it. Superb piece!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 25 January 2016

Thank you for reading and taking time for writing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 September 2018

If you want to win more friends, Keep your smile on your face. Very practical tips indeed, and a good poem Aniruddha Pathak

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Madhuram Sharma 23 May 2017

very nice.....dear poet

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Akhtar Jawad 27 February 2016

If you want to win more friends, Keep your smile on your face. A beautiful message that provokes thinking.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 29 February 2016

Thank you Mr.Jawad for taking time to read this poem.

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Bharati Nayak 17 February 2016

If you want to win more friends Keep your smile on your face- - - - - -Nice sharing of your thoughts on friendship.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 17 February 2016

Thank you for your nice comment.

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Ernest Makuakua 27 January 2016

well just straight to the point thanks for sharing i like it im inspired

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Abderrahmane Dakir 27 January 2016

Thanks for your comment. I'm glad that you like it.

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