Message Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir
Message
After achieving my first goal, they tell me I've succeeded,
The next day, I was inwardly bored and very depressed.
Once I related myself to the One of limitless power,
I leash my limits to build my success higher than their tower,
I was been created to live in joy and change my life for the better,
Since He gave me love, ability, brain and limitless flower,
To set the main goal for family, job and other,
And make a sense for my life forever.
I find my passion, whatever I do,
My time goes into.
My wish is to live the longest day,
To meet all my goals before I pass away.
May I change your color?
From dark blue to water.
Was should be have. Your sense of purpose and satisfaction shines through.
The definition of success is different. May I think, living a happy life is also a kind of success? At least, when we are happy, our heart is sunny warm and healthy. Your poem is thought-provoking. I enjoyed it.
this is a really beautiful piece of work..keep striving to be the best in everything!
Unless you cherish an insatiable hunger for achieving your goals one by one there is no meaning to live a long life. It will be dull and insipid. But you have zeal to go on. Loved it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 6:55:11 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Once I related myself to the One of limitless power, I leash my limits to build my success higher than their tower, relying on the limitless power above. you are on the right path dear poet. tony