Message Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

Message

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After achieving my first goal, they tell me I've succeeded,
The next day, I was inwardly bored and very depressed.

Once I related myself to the One of limitless power,
I leash my limits to build my success higher than their tower,

I was been created to live in joy and change my life for the better,
Since He gave me love, ability, brain and limitless flower,
To set the main goal for family, job and other,
And make a sense for my life forever.

I find my passion, whatever I do,
My time goes into.

My wish is to live the longest day,
To meet all my goals before I pass away.

May I change your color?
From dark blue to water.

Message
Wednesday, January 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: boredom,emptiness,goal,life,power,success,time,timeless
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 February 2019

Once I related myself to the One of limitless power, I leash my limits to build my success higher than their tower, relying on the limitless power above. you are on the right path dear poet. tony

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Billy Loving 10 February 2017

Was should be have. Your sense of purpose and satisfaction shines through.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 13 March 2017

Thank You very much for reading.

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Cigeng Zhang 30 January 2017

The definition of success is different. May I think, living a happy life is also a kind of success? At least, when we are happy, our heart is sunny warm and healthy. Your poem is thought-provoking. I enjoyed it.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 31 January 2017

Thank you for wonderful comment.

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Daya Nandan 29 January 2017

this is a really beautiful piece of work..keep striving to be the best in everything!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 31 January 2017

Your comment is so beautiful.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 January 2017

Unless you cherish an insatiable hunger for achieving your goals one by one there is no meaning to live a long life. It will be dull and insipid. But you have zeal to go on. Loved it.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 31 January 2017

Thank you for taking time to read that poem.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 31 January 2017

Thank you for reading my poem.

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