****~melancholy Memory~**** Poem by Amit Ray

****~melancholy Memory~****

Rating: 5.0


Kissed off loneliness
in your togetherness
-a sepulchral statue,
bullet hole

Broken clouds debacle
ghastly cold, in confined
years of solitude,
sycamore

Scuttling in mirrors,
a filled, unfulfilled
fidgeting in sanity
of a snare

Butterflies dead
in avenue of the
cypresses, uncouth bird`s
aureoles

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 03 January 2014

this piece is in different than your customary style... this is better... i love it

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Ramesh Rai 21 June 2015

Cool and calm. Thank you so much for sharing. Awaiting for next.

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East Sea Fairy East Sea Fairy 30 September 2020

w great poem with wonderfu images

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Harindhar Reddy 14 April 2020

Amazing flow flow of words on being lonely before meeting another soul. You often cast spell with your magic verse. I wonder if could write more or even if you already have written a whole lot with us. You can wrought wonders with your poetry. My friend Amit I am always indebted to your countless commentaries on my poems. Hats off to you, dude.

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Chinedu Dike 08 February 2017

An insightful depiction of painful memory nicely brought forth in heightened diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 April 2016

Broken clouds debacle ghastly cold, in confined years of solitude, sycamore.... and Butterflies dead in avenue of the cypresses, uncouth bird`s aureoles.. The beautiful lines off your pen. Thank you poet for this nice poem. It deserves 10.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2016

Solitude! ! With the muse of sweet love. Nice work.

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Amit Ray

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