Kissed off loneliness
in your togetherness
-a sepulchral statue,
bullet hole
Broken clouds debacle
ghastly cold, in confined
years of solitude,
sycamore
Scuttling in mirrors,
a filled, unfulfilled
fidgeting in sanity
of a snare
Butterflies dead
in avenue of the
cypresses, uncouth bird`s
aureoles
Amazing flow flow of words on being lonely before meeting another soul. You often cast spell with your magic verse. I wonder if could write more or even if you already have written a whole lot with us. You can wrought wonders with your poetry. My friend Amit I am always indebted to your countless commentaries on my poems. Hats off to you, dude.
An insightful depiction of painful memory nicely brought forth in heightened diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
Broken clouds debacle ghastly cold, in confined years of solitude, sycamore.... and Butterflies dead in avenue of the cypresses, uncouth bird`s aureoles.. The beautiful lines off your pen. Thank you poet for this nice poem. It deserves 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this piece is in different than your customary style... this is better... i love it