Melodies Poem by Sandra Feldman

Melodies

Rating: 5.0


I have no music today,
Hardly anything to say,
I've run out of themes,
Disappointingly,
They come no more,
Not even a slight knocking,
At my cottage door.

I'm dormant now,
Have to figure out, somehow
Why I ever wrote, the things I did,
But it really doesn't matter,
For I know that when I did,
My inner feelings never lied,
And sincerity is always better
Than a lot of useless clatter,
It's good to have that music,
Without forcing, by your side.

Saturday, June 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: inspiration
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 17 June 2017

I have no music today, Hardly anything to say, I've run out of themes, Disappointingly, They come no more, Not even a slight knocking, At my cottage door. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I fell in love with how you introduce a poem about lack of inspiration in such a creative way. I picture your little cottage with a small fire in its fireplace barely keeping the home warm- - it is chilly in there and the hands are too cold to pick up the pen on the table and warm this home with words of different colors and shapes and wings... But we who come to this woman's cottage know that inspiration will come soon to her door and our friend will whole-heartedly welcome her in! And then we are all in for some good home-made treats baked in the kiln of artistry and love. Beautiful poem! ! ! ! Even in the moment you feel no inspiration, your poems still sparkle with creativity and truth and poetic phraseology! Fantastic piece, my very inspired friend! 10+++++++++++++++++++

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Lyn Paul 17 June 2017

All your writing is beautiful and often inspiring. Writing is incredibly healing to writer and the reader. xxx

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