Sunday, June 3, 2018

Memory Comments

Rating: 4.8

Memory, not needing to say a word
for having vision within the soul.
Slaves, entwined in each other
Charioteer for your mind,
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Abhay Agarwal
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Gia C 14 June 2018

Amazing poem. You have a gift for writing .

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Chinedu Dike 14 June 2018

Well thought and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Abhay.

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Simran A 14 June 2018

Very nicely written, you described memory is such simple but meaningful words. Thank for sharing!

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Kelly Kurt 14 June 2018

Continue to write and post, Abhay. You have a talent.

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Subh A 14 June 2018

This is amazing work. Keep it up

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 14 June 2018

Great work done here in this moving poem.... He only holds the pain, and suffering Happiness at a distance. And he still looks through you .... Yet, stained by memory.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 June 2018

Slaves! ! ! History! Memories. Thanks for sharing.

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Nitika Gogia 14 June 2018

Beautifully expressed. Nicely described. Great thought. Well done 👍

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 June 2018

Memory perhaps a stained one, may be a barricade to future, yet we existed in that and exists in present. Beautiful poem. Congratulations!

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KimRisa 14 June 2018

What a great poem! Congratulations.

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Lisabeth 14 June 2018

Phenomenal writer. What a beautiful poem. Congratulations!

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Melanie 14 June 2018

What beautiful words

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Sammy Siddique 14 June 2018

It's a beautiful poem - Congratulations!

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Grace 14 June 2018

Wonderful poem Congratulations

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Nidhi 14 June 2018

Beautifully expressed.

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Tripta Agarwal 14 June 2018

Congratulations for beautiful poem Thanks for sharing .

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Krishan Agarwal 14 June 2018

Wonderful thoughts about memory I love it

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Savita Tyagi 14 June 2018

Best that I have read for memory at least for my current memory. Congratulations for a beautiful poem and member poem selection.

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Aarzoo Mehek 14 June 2018

Memories kill as well has it has the power to lift us up. We tend to hold on to the past trading the present and future.. beautifully expressed Abhay. Congratulation for being the member of the day.10++

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 14 June 2018

A memorable thought about memory. Many essential feature of memory, beautifully articulated to a poem. Congrats on your positioning as the member's PoD. Thanks for sharing. X

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