karen sinclair

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Memory Foam..... Peace In A Bottle..... Adultish - Poem by karen sinclair

At last....
Held embryonic pose
No pause for thought just
Sleeping rose

Tranquil are the pulses which usually fight
Tender movement
Warmth seeps through bleary eyed mist
As pillows and arms swaddle...... bliss

At last....
Peace whispers
Tis safe to rest my weary head
Pon your
Missed shoulder
Memory foam bed

Relief strokes brow shoulder thigh
As night time waltzed

Poet's Notes about The Poem

plz note if i dont respond as quickly as usual... im painting...... peace

At last....

Just waffling now..... titanium white, fresh spring green, dandelion yellow all surrounded by a pale blue sky....

Comments about Memory Foam..... Peace In A Bottle..... Adultish by karen sinclair

  • Anita Sehgal (10/3/2012 6:02:00 AM)

    enjoyed reading this poem too! (Report) Reply

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  • Anita Sehgal (10/3/2012 6:01:00 AM)

    enjoyed reading this poem too! (Report) Reply

  • (9/21/2012 11:58:00 AM)

    Sounds good, but rather than a shoulder, I prefer mammary foam to lay 'neath my head.; ^) (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (9/20/2012 4:02:00 PM)

    ith jolt of genesis creation cries
    heart to engross upon myth of earthly mystery
    mellowed rose reminisces tranquil breath of night
    sipping beauty of green yet unobtrusive

    soul seems to swaddle awakening joy
    clouds of mist ramifies into warmth of universe
    gravity is law of attraction to resuscitate apple to fall
    dream slowly redeems at altar of longing
    belonging bequeaths holding qualms of conscience, wonderful write
    (Report) Reply

  • (9/16/2012 5:29:00 PM)

    beautiful, peaceful, warm, and vibrant! (Report) Reply

  • Hamid Negah (9/5/2012 12:58:00 AM)

    Very nice writting...i loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (9/3/2012 12:20:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, enjoyed the read. (Report) Reply

  • (9/1/2012 1:25:00 PM)

    beautiful poem from a beautiful heart...a splendid write mam...such a perfect words making a perfect sonnet...
    love it
    thank you for sharing,
    (Report) Reply

  • (8/31/2012 5:41:00 AM)

    A nice write, personal and intimate. Those we long for and fit together so well when united, lovely. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 31, 2012

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