Thomas Plotz

Mermaid Girl (Haiku) - Poem by Thomas Plotz

Mermaid girl, swimming

Big brown eyes, with soothing smile

Stay by me, and play

T. Plotz
Mermaid Girl (Haiku)
13 JAN 2016

Topic(s) of this poem: girl, nature, ocean waves, water

Form: Haiku

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Nothing like an ocean swim, and my girl from under the sea.(Bess R.)

Comments about Mermaid Girl (Haiku) by Thomas Plotz

  • (1/13/2016 7:32:00 PM)

    5-7-5 says
    'haiku' is something other
    than 5-7-5
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    Thomas Plotz Thomas Plotz (1/14/2016 7:56:00 AM)

    Dear Mr. Scotney, at the bottom of the poem the form states Haiku - I either mark a poem Haiku or 5-7-5 in the title, due to some people don't like a Haiku; therefore they know what to expect. Thank you for your comment, Sir.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/13/2016 7:18:00 PM)

    Soothing smile is wonderfully expressive in this sharing... (Report) Reply

    Thomas Plotz Thomas Plotz (1/14/2016 7:58:00 AM)

    Thank you Kumarmani for your comment Sir.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 13, 2016

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 19, 2016

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