Mermaid Girl (Haiku) Poem by Thomas Plotz

Mermaid Girl (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


Mermaid girl, swimming

Big brown eyes, with soothing smile

Stay by me, and play


T. Plotz
Mermaid Girl (Haiku)
13 JAN 2016

Wednesday, January 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: girl,nature,ocean waves,water
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Nothing like an ocean swim, and my girl from under the sea.(Bess R.)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 June 2019

A beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing, Thomas.

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Douglas Scotney 13 January 2016

5-7-5 says 'haiku' is something other than 5-7-5

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Thomas Plotz 14 January 2016

Dear Mr. Scotney, at the bottom of the poem the form states Haiku - I either mark a poem Haiku or 5-7-5 in the title, due to some people don't like a Haiku; therefore they know what to expect. Thank you for your comment, Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 January 2016

Soothing smile is wonderfully expressive in this sharing...

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Thomas Plotz 14 January 2016

Thank you Kumarmani for your comment Sir.

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