Sunday, October 11, 2015

Mi Poesia, My Poetry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mi poesia,
Mientras mas triste
mas mia.
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Sandra Feldman
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Eugene Levich 18 October 2015

Very beautiful, Sandracita, worthy of el siglo de oro!

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Chuy Amante 11 October 2015

Mi Poesia mas loco mas mio muy poco un lio!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2015

My poetry, The sadder it is, The greater the intimacy........so true. Well envisioned. TFS.

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Kim Barney 11 October 2015

Sandra, I love the poem, even though the translation is very rough. If you were to translate the English version into Spanish, you would get Mi poesía, el más triste que es, cuanto mayor es la intimidad. And if I were to translate your Spanish version into English, I would say My poetry, the sadder it is, the more it is (truly) mine. In any case, very well done. Your work is always high quality. I am voting it a ten based on the Spanish version, not on the translation.

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Kelly Kurt 11 October 2015

Kind of sad but probably true

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Pamela Sinicrope 11 October 2015

I like this Ms. Feldman, bilingual poet. I think this is often true. :)

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