Monday, June 8, 2020

Miami Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

Watching the children play
On the sandy beach
A ball was kicked towards me
And I wondered if they wanted me to play
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Linda Bella Wassermeister 18 January 2022

I think MJ Lemon said it all.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 July 2020

People have mistaken my female identity that I'm quite proud of being a lady, even without seeing my pic sometimes, just by my writings. So I can get you here in this unique fantastic lovely poem. But when I'm all veiled and covered up people who see me never mistake my identity and gender at least. Kudos. Best wishes, this is the one you meant right.

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Kevin Patrick 20 June 2020

I agree with Mj there is sadness, I wasn't ready for the denouement but it made me sad, its always a little hurtful when something like that occurs. All the love LeeAnn

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Richard Wlodarski 10 June 2020

M.J. Lemon has expressed my exact sentiments.

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Mj Lemon 09 June 2020

There's maybe a tinge of sadness here...a calm scenario sets the scene, then a jarring note surfaces. Brilliant, LeeAnn!

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 June 2020

Mistaken identity! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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