Mice And Rice Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Mice And Rice

Rating: 5.0


Oh! Those field mice emptied my bin of rice
But they kept few grains for me to swallow,
Not like some of my wonderful relatives here
They carry fire underneath the water.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 17 January 2009

wonderful poem Nimal, well our people are very efficient in bringing fire in water.

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Shani Bogamuwa 13 June 2008

I understand that you are suffering Nimal uncle Just hope for the best to overcome yours and manel auntie's obstacles

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Sandra Fowler 13 June 2008

Very ironic, an interesting comparison. Excellent write, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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