Micro Poems- 4 Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Micro Poems- 4

Rating: 5.0


to get out of yourself
for a while
that would be
real freedom
- - -self-negation


love is a bad habit
hard to let go of
harder to live with
- - -unrequited love


peace is home
and home is you
and you are far
too far to reach
- - homelessness


is there anything
more poetic
than crying eyes
and a crying heart
- - - melancholia


to embrace
your scars
with all your heart
the sooner you learn
the better
- - - lesson of life


Nosheen Irfan © 2017

Thursday, July 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 27 July 2017

Wonderful....! I am not sure which is better...! All the five are equally good. The nano effect of these poems is more powerful than a long narrative of several lines! Beautiful crystallized insights! ! I award you top marks!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 November 2022

Enjoyed all the poems here Kudos

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 September 2018

just marvelous publishing worth....U R no micro poet but a major one and at a macro level publish ur micro if you wish let the world share it as a luscious dish o what a fish such is any poets wish if only i could make one all will enjoy the lovely hot sun and enjoy my share as i do yours oh Nasheen it's like purdah nasheen Creative poetry we all have just seen

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Daniel Brick 31 July 2017

What small but resonant wonders these poems are! ! Each one goes to the heart of a deep emotional response to a life experience.. Each one is like a stab of truth which makes us both wince and rejoice. Wince because of disappointments we must face but rejoice because we know this is our human life lived to its fullest.In the end you take us to a common awareness of our fate. I really APPRECIATE these poems, Nosheen. You have spoken my feelings too

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 September 2018

wonderful sir just a wonderful comment...just marvelous publishing worth....U R no micro poet but a major one and at a macro level publish ur micro if you wish let the world share it as a luscious dish o what a fish such is any poets wish if only i could make one all will enjoy the lovely hot sun and enjoy my share as i do yours oh Nasheen it's like purdah nasheen Creative poetry we all have just seen

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Muhammad Ali 29 July 2017

very beautiful pieces of poetry. each micro poem is a rain of feelings. superb

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2017

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. You have very nicely defined the five stages of life in micro and have justified the title of the poem. Marvelous presentation. Thanks for sharing.... full vote.

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Lahore, Pakistan
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