Micro Poems-1 Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Micro Poems-1

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(i)
The stream flowed on its course
as I lost my way
in the vale of despair
I followed it and found myself
shimmering in its ripples.
(ii)
I found peace under the trees
when the leaves were silent
and when they whispered tales
I was the most intent listener
I had so much to say
but I forgot everything
under the trees.
(iii)
I like my feet on dewy grass
that has drunk deep of night
slowly waking to the sun
till my feet no longer feel
the pain of the night.
(iv)
The river likes it
when my grief swims in it
It can empathize with me
without changing its route
we both love the sea.
(v)
The stars are bright
I'm happy, their eyes reach
beyond my skin
I feel their light
making a home in me.


Nosheen Irfan © 2016
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Sunday, July 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: human,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired from Taoist poems of Daniel Brick.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 10 July 2016

I found peace under the trees! ! Nice piece of work.

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Beautiful poems.Thanks for sharing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 September 2018

U R no micro poet but a major one and at a macro level publish ur micro if you wish let the world share it as a luscious dish o what a fish such is any poets wish if only i could make one all will enjoy the lovely hot sun and enjoy my share as i do yours oh Nasheen it's like purdah nasheen Creative poetry we all have just seen

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

In the vale of despair! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 August 2016

Beautiful lines.. The stars are bright I'm happy, their eyes reach beyond my skin I feel their light making a home in me. All are good. Loved reading it.

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Kelly Kurt 10 July 2016

For such a young woman, you write with an old soul. Wonderfully written, my friend

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Nosheen Irfan 11 July 2016

Thanku so much Kelly. I'm flattered you think me young. Lol.

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Barry Middleton 10 July 2016

Lovely. I like them all but especially the first. I like that you grouped them this way as they have a common theme of finding comfort and reassurance in nature. A 10

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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