Mijn Kijk Op Het Leven..... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Mijn Kijk Op Het Leven.....

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Mijn Kijk Op Het Leven....
Tevreden Zijn Met Het Kostbare Leven...

Alle roddels in het dagelijks leven,
ik heb tot nu toe niets gehoord,
maar sinds de corona-pandemie overal plaatsvond
en staten zijn van kracht,
je laat de poppen dansen,
de ene roddel na de andere komt snel binnen,

voordat ik me realiseer dat het roddel is,
is het nieuws alweer weg,
om daarover te lezen,
is moeilijk voor mij,
net zoals God me probeert te voorkomen
om dat te lezen,
ik herinner me ook niets,
dank je lieve God voor het redden van alle problematiek op poem hunter, die niets te maken hebben met het schrijven van goede en mooie poëzie,
ik vind het zelfs niet erg dat mensen "vechten" vanwege hunberichten,
ik vind het helemaal niet erg,
sommige namen bestaan niet meer
en plotseling komen er weer nieuwe namen bij
uit Australië, India, Noord-Amerika of Engeland,
iedereen is welkom, open voor het wereldpubliek, iedereen zegt zijn antwoord,
zo is het,
alles en nog wat gebeurt op het internet,
vredig is iets anders dan vrede en tevredenheid.

Publiceer alstublieft niet zoveel gif,
blijf niet vitten, het doet iedereen die het weet pijn,
en bedrog heeft niets te maken met het creëren van schoonheid in poëzie,
net als de vader aap, die zoveel van zijn kinderen houdt, dat hij ze dood verplettert, omdat hij zoveel van ze houdt...
ik moet je dit vertellen omdat het zoveel pijn doet...
schrijf alstublieft over schoonheid en schrijf nooit over gif....
stijgdaarna weer hoog, hemel diep….

This is a translation of the poem My View Upon Life…. by Sylvia Frances Chan
Thursday, April 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
ik moet je dit vertellen omdat het zoveel pijn doet...
schrijf alstublieft over schoonheid en schrijf nooit over gif....
stijgdaarna weer hoog, hemel diep….


©Sylvia Frances Chan
9 April 2020
Donderdag 4 dagen voor Eerste Paasdag
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Every one should be welcomed to the world of poetry. Poetry should carry the beauty and responsibility. Poetry should carry peace and love. Wonderful message is transferred with greater perception. Every poet has to soar high. Every poet should have deep love for poetry. This poem is very amazingly and brilliantly penned. This deserves full 10 point and I have already rated.*

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Life is precious and life is full of joy whenever remains with God. We should remember God everyday at each moment. Due to attack of Corona virus all of us are in Lock-down and we should be in safer place and safer mood. We are in quarantine at own homes. We are not being able to hear all the gossip. We should be in mood of silence and creating golden and beautiful poetry.*@

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

''If anyone writes poetry with vices and violence then this is just like Poison and it hurts others who know the truth or who do not know about it. This is so sad. Poetry should be beautiful and peaceful. We completely agree with you exactly. A poet of high qualification should be responsible for creating honest, peaceful and beautiful poetry and he should not defame or insult any generous woman. He should have sense that whatever he is saying should be beneficial to society."

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

" Problems come and go. Although these affect us temporarily still we keep patience and overcome. We convey about every problem to God. He listens to us as he is always graceful towards us. We are here to create good, peaceful and beautiful poetry and problems cannot hamper our effort of values at all. Beauty in poetry and peace in poetry should be our ambition." *

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

This is very nice to read. Especially for personal gain one should not deliberately cause or force someone to believe something that is not true or imaginary. One should be responsible and should not complain and complain about something in a bad-tempered way. This hurts and creates poison. And poetry should be away from such poison. Creating beautiful poetry is the act of a responsible poet.

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Budhashaya Behera 09 April 2020

I cannot read this Dutch version but as you have written this is very interesting as this is sweetly recited. Thank you dear poetess.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Reading this poem we are getting immense pleasure and peace is needed in poetry definitely. We should give peace to others.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Reading this Dutch version of poetry we are very happy. Thank you very much for presenting the translation. This is of course an interesting poem. May God bring happiness for you and your family!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Freedom of one person should not affect another. One should be responsible not to defame another or cause harm to another with selfish motive and greedy attachment. Poetry is freedom of expression and this should be free from vices. Your opinion or view upon life is wonderful and here I have presented my comprehensive review. Thank you very much for sharing your wonderful view. This poem is excellently penned.**

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Always you tell the truth and write about your wonderful perception. You are rare among rarest poets and poetesses. You are very right and poetry should carry peace. Being peaceful is different than a state of happiness and satisfaction. More than we are happy we should be peaceful. Time is precious. We should utilize this and we should not waste this unnecessarily. Everyone has freedom of expression but freedom should be expressed under self control.**

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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Jakarta, Indonesia
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