Mind Pollution Poem by Subbaraman N V

Mind Pollution

Rating: 4.6


Pollution indeed blocks the way
To clear, dearly we have to pay
Varied indeed the monsters play
To be vigilant all the way!

Air, water, soil we pollute
Making global warmth resolute
Bye to health and joy absolute
Pity we accept and salute!

Far worse is our mind pollution
Denies problems nice solution
Fills the man's mind with all cobwebs
Hard to clear with all world wide webs!

Fear, anxiety, worries for ever
Peace and poise, pleasure and joy never
Life of self and all made poorer
Worse indeed is mind pollution!

When polluted, knows not right or wrong
Good or bad, ill or well - vices throng
Sure only His grace and guidance help
Pray God, seek HIS grace and speak with self!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harish K. Thakur 16 June 2008

Of course the web of information and technology has drawn new lines of civilization more averse to the objectives of peace, nature and environment. Nice piece.

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Kesav Easwaran 16 June 2008

pollution affecting body and mind...the latter is of prime importance for a healthier mind is needed most for humans to lead painless life in this world...a poem with prime message...10

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Rema Prasanna 15 June 2008

Absolutely right, it is a menace we face of late, i do not know any escape from mind pollution.... a very good write... thanks for sharing this 10+

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Raveendran . 17 June 2008

The theme of this beautiful poem hints at the value of silence. You have a nice rhyme scheme to accompany your thoughts when you air them with vigour.

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Rachel The Hair Guru 17 June 2008

We should recycle our minds daily. There is a lot of garbage out there! Thanks for the read and the thoughts it stirred.

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Ankita Sinha 20 May 2020

Wow great

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The entire poem is very well done and is a poetic truth of the corruption of life and unfairity that the mind tends to ignore. Many great minds are ignored for their expressions on the pollutions we have made on this earth, and you are one that should never be ignored, for this poem is, if not the truth, a message of warning and obvious coming of the pollution that is to come to our minds. Nicely done Subbaraman!

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David Barlow 25 June 2008

So very true Subbaraman and all fed on greed by Goverments and individuals. Commercialism and unthinking waste of precious resources creats more frustation and mind pollution for all of us. Very well thought out piece, Thank you for sharing it. Peace and love, David

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Cathleen Hodgkinson 23 June 2008

If only man could silence all mind pollution...then all other sources of worldly pollution and mankind's path of self destruction would subside as well...beautifully written Subbaraman...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 23 June 2008

The worst thing among the many kind of pollutions is the mind pollution, which is highlighted in this nice poem.

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Subbaraman N V

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Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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