Mirror! ! ! ! Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Mirror! ! ! !

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Mirror I love thy not for u show my true face,
Gone are those days when u were mine,
How can I forget those moments when u showed glamour?
Now with my creeping age you are apathetic.
I admired u and gave my precious time
Spent umpteen hours cleaning your face
you & I were young at that time.

Now we both are fading with age
You have picked scratch and dirt, I the wrinkles
My hair's shine like moonbeams your lines multiplies more
Facing you I afraid to brush my teeth
Can't neither avoid you nor can live with u.
Don't know what to do but for sure will remember u.
Tell me how should I destroy u?

Tuesday, August 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mirror,satire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Dillon 09 January 2016

Yea, time does that lol good writing.

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M Asim Nehal 09 January 2016

Thanks much for honoring my request. I really appreciate your comments.

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Manonton Dalan 22 November 2015

time does change how we look and maybe feel

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M Asim Nehal 11 January 2016

Thanks much Manonton

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 01 September 2015

Change in age has been portrayed beautifully.Keep it up Asim Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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M Asim Nehal 29 November 2015

Thanks much Col Khalid

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Soul Watcher 01 September 2015

You nailed it Mohammed, I liked your diction.

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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2015

Thank u so much....

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David Wood 29 August 2015

Mirrors are there to condemn us as we get older but they never change or lie. Lovely poem

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M Asim Nehal 29 August 2015

Thanks much for honoring my request.

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