M. Asim Nehal

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Mindful - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

They say my heart is a wild creature
Hence it is behind the rib cage
Then why my thoughts are let free to float?

They say my eyes see many dreams
Hence is soaked with tears
Then why does it change colors with moods?

They say my nose is spiky
Hence, is left outside the face
Then why it uplifts my sensual taste?

They say my ears are flashy
Hence are put on two sides
Then why do they alert my mind?

They say my tongue is sharp
Hence is kept inside the quiver of teeth
Then why it is flexible and boneless?

They say my mind is put under skull
Hence it rotates 360 Degree with thoughts
I agree with them on this.

Function of mind is broad and wide
It can hold, produce, and reproduce
And command all body parts.

Topic(s) of this poem: mind, soul

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Mindful by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/22/2015 11:26:00 AM)


    beautiful mind.... I love it (Report) Reply

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  • (10/31/2015 1:38:00 PM)


    Really mindful poem many questions will remain unanswered. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/31/2015 10:42:00 AM)


    Function of mind is broad and wide
    It can hold, produce, and reproduce
    And command all body parts.....true dictum, so nicely depicted. It is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.......10
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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/31/2015 5:32:00 AM)


    verily, the flight of mind is amazing crossing the seven seas and skies.
    a lovely poem indeed
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  • Alice Perfect (10/31/2015 1:05:00 AM)


    hold and reproduces yeah, the brain anyway...
    Produces? If is only a chemical machine
    something much more grand produces
    the Creator shall we say?


    lovely thoughts
    it's wonderful to express
    thoughts of the heart and mind
    the left and right
    a balance,
    onemess
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  • Sanjukta Nag (10/30/2015 11:56:00 PM)


    Function of mind is broad and wide
    It can hold, produce, and reproduce
    And command all body parts.
    This is the most valuable realization. Very wisely written poem. beyond rating.
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  • Kelly Kurt (10/30/2015 2:39:00 PM)


    a wonderful and fun poem. Thanks, Mohammed (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2015 1:11:00 PM)


    everything is in their right place
    that's why writing poems you're an ace
    Thanks Asim-10+++
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  • Ari Alsio (10/30/2015 12:54:00 PM)


    They say my tongue is sharp
    and they say my heart is a wild creature

    - and they say that it is a very bad combination...

    Thanks M A N
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, October 30, 2015


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