(mis) Taken Poem by Sonya Florentino

This is really sweet and clever. I enjoyed it a lot.

...... because the second one made you rise in love, dear.....

Enjoyed this one..Ha ha

the 'taken' will be taken again :) sweet wording! 10+

mistaken....yes; misgiven as well...inner conflict nicely expressed...thanks...10

so often repeated in music, art, and poetry wherein the artist becomes the object of affection as a result of the music, poem, sculpture and often the work enables the love of the two, the artist and the receiver, to become as one in sweet repose. Wonderful thought...

This is very cleverly composed and a theme that is repeated often in relationships, I'm sure. But the way your present your subject is almost like a puzzle for the reader to solve. I particularly liked the 'guitar from the man' allegory and the hint of wistfulness that never intrudes. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Such a clever creative title Sonya with a poem where love is not as simple as one would imagine. I really like the perspective you give this one. Top marks. love from Karin

beautuful and sad as the solo strumming into the dusk...along yon desert road... very well expressed sonya great write cheers

Loved it. Love sometimes is confusing.