Mischance ~ 3 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Mischance ~ 3

Rating: 5.0


Yet again, a voice calls me
on a moonless night
from the bottom of the valley
to those ruins of the past
that haunts like the seabirds.
And I empty my mind from
the sorrowful present thoughts
to sail in the direction of the voice
with a whirlwind of ecstasy.

The night clears the doubts
and throws me to the seashore
where the sun is ready to rise
Nature is dancing with joy
And I am ready to sail on the waves
As I look back to see no one is there
Then who called me from the far?

Tuesday, November 16, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: mysterious,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tihama Hykam 16 November 2021

Leaving behind the past is the best option to enjoy the future. Inspiring.

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Martinez Salotori 16 November 2021

Mysterious life holds many mystery and this is one of them. Perfect with philosophical touch.

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Indira Renganathan 16 November 2021

Many mental disturbances like this are there which can lead us to psychotic disorder or disease....indeed a cleaver and interesting write...top score

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As the universe keeps an eye over our repercussions it, sometimes, diverts our attention from pathos

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 November 2021

This poem is a whrilworld of ecstasy Bravo!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 November 2021

The call of the soul......written with such emotion......brilliant Asim ji.....10

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Michael Jack 17 November 2021

I missed my chances too. Lovely.

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Juhaina Tumlu 16 November 2021

Poem connecting with the soul, enlightment.

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