Your opinion of blaming others
This is not right at all,
Because your view is based on
Faulty thinking and understanding,
Doubt and misunderstanding
Both are outcome of negative thoughts,
You feel deeply and be positive.
No senior is jealous, no one hurts you,
No one blocks your progress or to glow,
When flow of your mind is positive,
You can flow and grow and glow and know,
Throwing stones towards others doubtfully
It is not good, no one admires such work,
Showing your courage of positive mind,
You can grow and no one prevents.
Whatever you receive is your own earning,
Your every action gives frequent reaction,
Due to misconception you blame others,
When your conception is right, you can feel.
Victory earned by war is not real victory,
Victory earned by violence breaks soon,
When your words are full of ego and violence,
These may bring danger for you with victory,
With victory these may bring destruction too,
When you try to destroy others
At the same moment you destroy yourself,
So, be positive and calm from inside,
This is better you behave positively
And feel inner peace and give peace,
From far we send our blessings.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,07 November 2018. All rights reserved.
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We have to avoid jealousy, hatred, violence and ego. A stunning and valuable message is transferred. Positive mind can give us peace. This poem has its own worth.
Blaming others is not at all right. One should stay away from such activity. This poem teaches us values.
Misconception and misunderstanding should be removed from mind. Conception of positive motivation should be brought up within mind. This poem is very brilliantly penned.
TWO: Yes, From far we send our blessings. Such a most beautiful poem worded in loveliest and powerful words, Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, we all can mirror ourselves to this excellent poetry from your sweetest mind. We can read here the best advices in this soliloquy. Thank you so much for sharing. A Full Vote 10. G.B.U. Amen
ONE: I like very much reading the whole poem, it is a brilliant poem, it has an excellent subject, I want to cite all the lines, but I know that is impossible, so I limit myself to cite these loveliest lines only: When you try to destroy others At the same moment you destroy yourself, So, be positive and calm from inside, This is better you behave positively And feel inner peace and give peace, From far we send our blessings.
Every moment is the right time to be reflecting on peace. A wonderful poem, Kumarmani.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very true! well penned! 10++