Laura Folse

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Poem by Laura Folse

i want to feel your breath on my ear
i want to hear your voice
those three words you would utter over and over
i have forgotten what they sound like

the touch of your hand
then smell of your clothes
the taste of your kiss
feeling you inside of me

i want to remember
desperately, i want to remember
but without you here
it seems impossible


Comments about Missing by Laura Folse

  • Nicholas Fontaine (1/31/2005 6:58:00 PM)

    I'm flattered, and honored. i can't believe how great you are. Keep writing, love.(Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Finch (11/9/2004 2:01:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful poem. The feeling of having your love away from you, is a sad and lonesome feeling. Your poem is good, the feelings you convey in this writing can be felt by others.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 9, 2004

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 9, 2004
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