Missing Grandchildren Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Missing Grandchildren

Rating: 5.0


So it's your day,
but you are away,
and I m alone,
I miss you my grandchildren,
I miss your command to leave my desktop,
as you want yo play a game on it,
and you want to read kids' poems on it.
I am missing your naught,
everything is at it's place,
my glasses are here,
my pen is here,
my books are here,
my wife is with me,
what should I look for,
how to kill the time!
the only missing thing
are you sweet hearts!

Monday, May 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: books,kids
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 13 July 2019

Who do not miss grandchildren, especially in this age of split families. As some wag said (he must be money/interest loving man) , one loves his son/daughter as the principal, and grandchildren as the interest!

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Lines deep from the heart..Really touching.

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Shahzia Batool 07 June 2016

~Everything's at its place, still the void is felt strongly... Grandchildren are more loved than one's own children, how meaningful these old sayings are: Asal se sood piyara... This is soulfully written...thumbs up!

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Bisma Mirza 31 May 2016

Sooo Beautiful.....10 on 10

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