Nebulous beauty
Buried in senseless symbols
Frames a modern art! !
Excellent satire. I prefer the classic approach both in art and in life.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra
Well, now i know why you did not bother to leave me the title....And i like it...I see that you have also employed the strict syllabic requirement of Traditional Zen Haiku, which indicates your true respect for both Asian poetic styles which in fact are ONLY seperated by theme...ans otherwise the adherence to the Haiku metre is strongly suggested...tho' too frequently ignored...Kudo's to you my friend...And, despite what you may here...and worse...what you may see on this free-for-all site......THERE ARE RULES & STRICT REQUIREMENTS TO MOST NON-FREE VERSE FORMS OF POETRY! FjR
Nebulous beauty Buried in senseless symbols Frames a modern art! great senryu 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
It's amazing how in so few words you can say so much. This describes abstract art well. Thanks for sharing.10+
It is an art for the artists only...confusing for the rest....but a good pastime hunting a treasure out of it.....interesting
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I have just found out my Haiku is Senyru! So now, I can enjoy it like I am reading yours! I know what you mean about modern art! Modern artists can use it for their own therapy, but more often than not, they can't relay the message to others. Important words for a misunderstanding of art. 10 Karin Anderson