*modern Art- Senryu Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

*modern Art- Senryu

Rating: 3.7

Nebulous beauty
Buried in senseless symbols
Frames a modern art! !


I have just found out my Haiku is Senyru! So now, I can enjoy it like I am reading yours! I know what you mean about modern art! Modern artists can use it for their own therapy, but more often than not, they can't relay the message to others. Important words for a misunderstanding of art. 10 Karin Anderson

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Sandra Fowler 29 May 2009

Excellent satire. I prefer the classic approach both in art and in life.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Reshma Ramesh 30 May 2009

hahhaaa! ! ! ! ! superb.....

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Indira Renganathan 01 June 2009

A very good definition of modern art...satirical

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Well, now i know why you did not bother to leave me the title....And i like it...I see that you have also employed the strict syllabic requirement of Traditional Zen Haiku, which indicates your true respect for both Asian poetic styles which in fact are ONLY seperated by theme...ans otherwise the adherence to the Haiku metre is strongly suggested...tho' too frequently ignored...Kudo's to you my friend...And, despite what you may here...and worse...what you may see on this free-for-all site......THERE ARE RULES & STRICT REQUIREMENTS TO MOST NON-FREE VERSE FORMS OF POETRY! FjR

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Adeeb Alfateh 17 June 2019

Nebulous beauty Buried in senseless symbols Frames a modern art! great senryu 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Catrina Heart 25 November 2009

wonderful senryu made......great art framed! ! !

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Gold Fish 16 October 2009

It's amazing how in so few words you can say so much. This describes abstract art well. Thanks for sharing.10+

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Indira Renganathan 05 September 2009

It is an art for the artists only...confusing for the rest....but a good pastime hunting a treasure out of it.....interesting

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Indira Babbellapati 26 August 2009

you do have a point there...modern art confuses me!

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