*playful Night..... Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

*playful Night.....

Rating: 4.1


Around the space of uttermost silence
The night showed its playful presence
Breaking the drought of intimate feelings
With the light of endearing darkness.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 07 April 2009

Great imagery Vaibhav....short and sweet poem 10+

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~ Jon London ~ 07 April 2009

Lines of purity my brother...I'm loving your work bro....keep bouncing them out......................Fantastic job, very well penned 10++

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Catrina Heart 07 April 2009

made the night cozy and lovely for the endearing love...............great poem 10+++

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Randy Hogan 07 April 2009

I love to look at sky; and those diamonds shine Heavenly bodies A divine poem my friend 10++++

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Myrtle Thomas 07 April 2009

A lovely calming effect in silence the stars speak.Beautiful, much enjoyed. A 10

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Rachel Butler 05 November 2009

'Breaking the drought of intimate feelings' Rachel Ann Butler

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Ritty Patnaik 16 August 2009

i am impressedwith the playful night, but i wish it had lasted longer! the poem is beautifully short, iwished to see some more lines.great work.

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Christopher Flynn 05 August 2009

A night of intimate darkness. To feel the silence Deep rich poem.

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C. P. Sharma 20 April 2009

Breaking the drought of intimate feelings With the light of endearing darkness....... Loved these lines with great poetic content and thought provoking too. CP

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Vidi Writes 19 April 2009

There is a magnificent stage set for us here We readers can feel the depth of that time and play It can take us to that height to be with the stars A play, forever to remember. Thank you. enjoyed reading it. Fast and Sweet.

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