*playful Night..... Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

*playful Night.....

Rating: 4.1


Around the space of uttermost silence
The night showed its playful presence
Breaking the drought of intimate feelings
With the light of endearing darkness.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 07 April 2009

Great imagery Vaibhav....short and sweet poem 10+

1 0 Reply
Sarvesh Kulkarni 07 April 2009

ohh fantastic. awesome poem. this is supernatural. loved it dost. thank you very much.

0 0 Reply
Sathyanarayana M V S 07 April 2009

Great imagery! True surrealism. Fantastic work Vaibhav.

0 0 Reply

the ambience brought out well..there was music in silence...there was light in darkness...lovely poem

0 0 Reply
Meggie Gultiano 06 April 2009

this speaks volume..I like it

0 0 Reply
Rachel Butler 05 November 2009

'Breaking the drought of intimate feelings' Rachel Ann Butler

0 1 Reply
Ritty Patnaik 16 August 2009

i am impressedwith the playful night, but i wish it had lasted longer! the poem is beautifully short, iwished to see some more lines.great work.

0 1 Reply
Christopher Flynn 05 August 2009

A night of intimate darkness. To feel the silence Deep rich poem.

0 1 Reply
C. P. Sharma 20 April 2009

Breaking the drought of intimate feelings With the light of endearing darkness....... Loved these lines with great poetic content and thought provoking too. CP

0 0 Reply
Vidi Writes 19 April 2009

There is a magnificent stage set for us here We readers can feel the depth of that time and play It can take us to that height to be with the stars A play, forever to remember. Thank you. enjoyed reading it. Fast and Sweet.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success