Around the space of uttermost silence
The night showed its playful presence
Breaking the drought of intimate feelings
With the light of endearing darkness.......
Lines of purity my brother...I'm loving your work bro....keep bouncing them out......................Fantastic job, very well penned 10++
made the night cozy and lovely for the endearing love...............great poem 10+++
I love to look at sky; and those diamonds shine Heavenly bodies A divine poem my friend 10++++
A lovely calming effect in silence the stars speak.Beautiful, much enjoyed. A 10
'Breaking the drought of intimate feelings' Rachel Ann Butler
i am impressedwith the playful night, but i wish it had lasted longer! the poem is beautifully short, iwished to see some more lines.great work.
A night of intimate darkness. To feel the silence Deep rich poem.
Breaking the drought of intimate feelings With the light of endearing darkness....... Loved these lines with great poetic content and thought provoking too. CP
There is a magnificent stage set for us here We readers can feel the depth of that time and play It can take us to that height to be with the stars A play, forever to remember. Thank you. enjoyed reading it. Fast and Sweet.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great imagery Vaibhav....short and sweet poem 10+