Wrinkled and dry skin needs care
Cream is needed for moisten this,
Beauty can be revived well once again,
Without care skin does not shine.
Doctor recommends moisturizer,
Taking prescription we buy this,
From medicine store we bring,
With medicament we massage.
Fungus, bacteria and virus do infection,
Diseases are seen on skin due to them,
Proper treatment is of curse needed,
Patient consults skin doctor in this case.
Wrinkled, dry and stressed mind,
This puzzles with anxiety and agony,
Like germs, vices infect mind a lot,
Senses do not remain in control of mind.
Wisdom becomes moisturizer really,
We need to apply this on mind daily,
Super Spiritual Doctor recommends this,
Wisdom is power that cures mind ever.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,27, September 2017. All rights reserved.
The best moisturizer is to drink plenty of plain water, to moisture dry feeling is to accept who we are...we will be fine :) by the way i am curious why you use moisturizer for this poem. It could be interesting to know hahahahaha... :)
External beauty is infected by germs and harmful viruses....! More damaging is the internal viruses like anxiety, hatred, tension, jealousy etc! They will make us age fast, taking the lustre off our skin. Also rob the beauty of our soul...! Wisdom and a pure mind will act as a moisturizer that will keep our body and mind hale and shiny! A beautiful poem! A sure 10
super medicament for the mind too....fantastic thinking.....thanks for sharing this here...and thanks a lot for your kind comment on my poem too...God bless you Kumar
Like germs, vices infect mind a lot, Senses do not remain in control of mind. Such a wonderful thought, well expressed. The Mind needs to keep moisturized as well as the skin, minds need to be cleaned on a regular basis, refreshed and revitalized, it is the only way to keep sanitized. Fantastic work!
A wonderful poem to get the mind working. I like how you have likened moisturizing the skin with moisturizing the mind. So I looked up brain exercises and discovered that there are many novel ways to do so. By using all five senses in non-routine ways, such as switching hands when writing, eating with chopsticks (with non-dominant hand if you're good at it) , doing chores blindfolded, wearing your watch upside down, trying new things or hobbies, learning a language, challenging the mind with mastery, meditation, and exercise. This is such a good poem that encourages one to get the brain working beneficially.
Wisdom becomes moisturizer really, We need to apply this on mind daily, wisely written, great share here, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Spiritual treatment always helps removing the root cause to the problem. No side effects at all. Very philosophical indeed. Thanks for sharing.