Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 701,971 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Mom, I Miss You - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Today is important day in my life
I found good partner in life as wife
It was great moment and your last wish,
Life is going smooth with fine finish

Your seed plant has now grown into big tree
I look back with satisfaction and feel free
Mom, it was you who nurtured me well,
Life otherwise would have been simple hell,

You fed me on ideals with honest means,
You neither yielded to temptation nor leaned by any means
You took stock of situation promptly and acted
Never acted in haste and reacted

I cherish your memory when I am at ease
How can I try your memory to be erased
You were always there to guide me in dream
In darkest hour you come as sun ray’s beam,

I have finest hour in life and place to remember
As youngest son I was naughty member
So much damage caused by me but you didn’t count number,
Though quite number of times I bowed and apology tendered

Suddenly I come to realize and raise look towards sky
Tears rush in eyes with tremendous force to cry
After passing of so many years you are still at heart,
You had so much devotion with concealing art

Twinkling stars and open sky resemble your smile
I see you in them there though they are away by many miles
As you used to do, Moon light shower silver blessings,
Body feels gentle touch as if with your sweet kissing

You used to run your fingers in thick hair deposits
I was compulsorily made to obey by her and sit
She may comb the hair to make me look good
Later on to serve with delicious and testy food

No compromise for hard work and study
She was stubborn with approach and strong lady
No one could dare to oppose her not even daddy
I was to gear up for everything and say ready

These were the happy moments I miss all along
I considered my self happiest person among
Had you ever been here for this happy occasion?
I considered it rare opportunity to be enjoyed by any person,

I have desire to offer you mom a beautiful flower,
you smile again from sky and bless the shower,
I shall consider it heavenly offer and receive as small child,
I miss you mom so much as you had always been very kind and mild


Comments about Mom, I Miss You by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (5/7/2010 1:50:00 PM)

    Here I love to mention, ’ One can’t clad a widowed Mother with benarasi sharee how rich and affluent the kids are’ [in India]
    No substitute of Mother
    Just I quote from comment by one commentator [AB ~ London] on my poem Omni Pervading Mother in major languages of world the word mother starts with alphabet ‘M’
    Maa [Bengali]
    Mа й к а [Bulgarian]
    Majka [Croatian]
    Matka [Czech]
    Moeder [Dutch]
    Mère [French]
    Mutter [German]
    Mháthair [Irish]
    Mā te [Latavian]
    Mа т ь [Russian]
    Madre [Spanish]
    Mati [Slovenian]
    Mor [Swedish]

    Voted 10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (3/11/2010 2:59:00 AM)

    Dear Mr.hasmukh amathalal,
    I have read your nice poem (Mom I miss you) … It touched my heart ….kindly read below a summary (with minor changes) of what I like the most….
    Thank you.
    Adnan,

    Your seed plant has now grown into big tree
    A seed full of love and nice happy memory
    You were always there in all my dreams
    In darkest hours you were my candle lights
    Twinkling sparkling stars resemble to your lovely eyes
    They remind me of your tender warm smiles.
    Moon light shower with silver blessing,
    touches my heart like your very sweet kissing
    These were the happy moments I miss all along
    I was the most happiest person among
    But now alone I miss your touch
    Cause mom I loved you very much
    I have the desire to offer you a flower,
    I got married mom I will become a father.
    Now I got the meaning of your faith prayer.
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  • Leonard Dabydeen (2/18/2010 8:03:00 AM)

    A wonderful tribute to Mom, Hasmukh. Deep, intense emotions wrapped in memory. A good write.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Blessings.
    Leonard
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  • (1/19/2010 9:24:00 PM)

    i guess she is an inspiration to you, to me my mother is the greatest. though i love and respect her beyond words can explain we still end up having arguments and silly fights, i love her more than anything nad anyone and hope our mothers blessings are always with us.


    great, emotional nad lovely.10++++
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  • (11/22/2009 1:36:00 PM)

    Moon light shower silver blessings,
    Body feels gentle touch with sweet kissing

    10
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  • Vinod Kumar (10/28/2009 10:16:00 AM)

    the tribute is beyond words..., especially to mother and god, nice job,10+ (Report)Reply

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  • (10/16/2009 9:24:00 PM)

    You did feed me with honest means,
    Neither to yield and nor to lean,
    Fair view of situation and act,
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  • (10/15/2009 11:35:00 PM)

    It was great moment and your last wish,
    Life is going smooth with fine finish,
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  • (10/15/2009 11:16:00 PM)

    Today is important day in life,
    You found good partner as my wife,
    It was great moment and your last wish,
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  • (10/15/2009 12:32:00 PM)

    You did feed me with honest means,
    Neither to yield and nor to lean,
    Fair view of situation and act,
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  • (9/19/2009 4:42:00 AM)

    Your small plant is now grown into big tree,
    I look back with satisfaction and feel free,
    Mom, it was you who nurtured me well,
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  • (9/18/2009 11:29:00 AM)

    I cherish your memory when at ease
    how can I afford in memory to erase

    Beautiful memories of Mom to cherish. A truly memorable poem. thanks for inviting me to read.
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  • (9/15/2009 9:52:00 PM)

    Today is important day in life,
    You found good partner as my wife,
    It was great moment and your last wish,
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  • (9/14/2009 10:25:00 AM)

    Today is important day in life,
    You found good partner as my wife,
    It was great moment and your last wish,
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  • (8/25/2009 4:50:00 PM)

    You were always there to guide me in dream,
    In darkest hour you come as sun ray’s beam, -->

    Mothers / children >>>>>>> a strong relationship,
    a REAL LOVE free from all kinds of betrayal
    a wonderful poem! I liked the flow....
    10+++++
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  • (8/19/2009 8:49:00 PM)

    good choce of words..opposiite from my poem called mother (Report)Reply

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  • (8/19/2009 8:37:00 AM)

    even today i miss u mom....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/14/2009 7:29:00 AM)

    mom i miss u too much....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/13/2009 10:08:00 PM)

    i miss u mom even today.....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/13/2009 10:03:00 PM)

    mom even i miss u today....10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, February 22, 2010


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