A shower,
Basking in the embrace of earth, her lover,
with her quivering lips on his chest
Her body shivering against his,
whispers her vows of love
Direct to his heart.
Thank you Puti for the lovely words of appreciation. Thank you for your precious time, as I know you are a quite busy person. Sorry that I noticed your post only now...
Her body shivering against his, whispers her vows of love Direct to his heart.......... touching expression full of romance. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10
I am thrilled to your appreciation of this little poem. And monsoon is one season I enjoy. And, probably everybody does. I am reminded of Ritusamhaaram by Great Kaalidasa..
It is great feeling to see my small poems appreciated by talented poets like you dear. Obliged for the good words.
Love is like a summer rain shower.Unexpected, intense, quenching the thirst of the heart.Superb poem!
You got it right, friend. Love happens just like a summer shower, with not with a little cloud to warn you about its arrival. That is why you always are taken by surprise. You get drenched in it.. Thanks dear...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully sewn and very heartwarming! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Thank you Becca, for the loving kindness. Thank you.