Moonlight Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

Moonlight

Rating: 5.0


crawling moonlight along the streets '
venturing heart going to appease
guiding the air with its eternal bliss
dampened love refuses to cease.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 22 February 2009

In a short verse like this one, it is hard to get a correct title. I prefer DAMPENED LOVE. I think that is what the poem is about, rather than MOONLIGHT. Just a thought. GW62

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Raj Nandy 22 February 2009

Beautiful Moonlight! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Tom Golding 13 February 2009

Visual expression in just the right length. A fine poem.

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~ Jon London ~ 10 February 2009

Nicely penned my friend such a comforting piece of amazing visual verse. Keep expressing 10+ Jon

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 08 February 2009

wow.... so calm and reassuring.... wonderful poem. beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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Shashendra Amalshan 08 August 2009

This is a very soothing one to read.. nice indeed Vaibhav, .. I m never being good at short and concise.. This is short, yet great.... love shan

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fleur de lys 28 July 2009

Young man you make me feel like retiring my pen...

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Yelena M. 12 April 2009

The magic and music of the night and moon inspired by an exquisite emotion from the depth of your heart.Good poetry cleverly uses words, excellent poetry does the same but goes somewhere beyond words, into the profoundity of the soul, too, like yours. Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Vaibhav. A.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 10 March 2009

wow......short and peaceful....thank you.

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Lucas Akkadian 08 March 2009

This is not lengthy, yet really thoughtful. I think it's great that you associated the moonlight with struggling love. I visualize myself having had yet another late night fight with my spouse/lover and taking a long night time walk to clear my head, only to realize that despite the stress I only love the person more. This is a great write.

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