My Broken Sleep Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

My Broken Sleep

Rating: 5.0

Huffed from my broken sleep,
I heard the wall clock tick-tock
like a tumultous streak of sound,
deafening my fickle ears in shock.

I got off the bed all distraught,
carting a frantic state of mind.
And all of a sudden saw heaven
through my window to unwind.

Awe followed the rude awakening
to the nature's mystic sight.
The beauteous scenario was enhanced
by the magic of the moonlight.

I thought it couldn't have gone better,
Yet it did to my surprise.
A mellifluous song came sailing with
the pouring of rain filled skies.

The trees were not left behind too,
They also played their part.
Swaying to the song of the nature
with the rhythm of heaven's heart.

From the dull sight of my ragged room
to the sheer musical joy.
My mind once felt so exhausted
found new wings to fly.

Then I lay down on my bed and
closed my quenched eyes,
And my sleep that was once broken
got mended by nature's lullabies...

Thanks to Carl Harris and Sathyanarayana MVS

Rani Turton 06 September 2009

Refreshing to read, and with vivid imagery.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 06 September 2009

A poet enjoys the nature's beauty even in his dreams, which means that he has a kind heart towards all the creations of God.

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 September 2009

From: Sathyanarayana M V S (Nellore, Andhra Pradesh India; Male; 49) To: Vaibhav Pandey Date Time: 9/6/2009 8: 46: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: My broken sleep It is good now Vaibhav. Clean, no ambiguity and cogent. Well done.

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C. P. Sharma 06 September 2009

A perfect poem written in true worship of Nature. Its beauty dances to the musical tunes. It is a joy to read it. CP

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 September 2009

heaven is in the heart...a lovely awakening...the improvements have enhanced the poem's beauty

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moribund love 24 October 2009

beauty flowing everywhere.10+

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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

From the rude awakenings and slashes of fate we have kits and kins to cuddle us, peers to cheer us and keep us away from the dark stromy weather.......10+++++++++

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Rup Pokharel 13 September 2009

Good to read your broken sleep. I liked it do give more of the type.! 10+++++

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Lynda Robson 11 September 2009

Nice poem Vaibhav, the beautiful sight you saw was worth being awake for, 10 Lynda x

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Lady Grace 09 September 2009

oh..what a nice poem..i appreciate the thought you expressed here..

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