Morning Sun Poem by Ratan Ghosh

Morning Sun

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The morning sun is smiling at

Me through the window blinds,

It's so sweet and warm

Just like the body of my beloved one.

I should be up and about before I see the sun,

I compete with the sun

Who will get up early

To beat the other one.



I am tempted to turn around

And to stay in bed a little longer,

To enjoy the warmth of the morning sun

Warming my body

A little longer this time.

But the Siuli flowers would wither away

If not picked right in time.

I need to get up before the sun shines.



I hear in my silent heart, wake up, wake up

My angel is already there, looking for me -

Together we are supposed to be there,

Picking the white flowers from the ground under the tree.

Am I dreaming now? half awake, half sleep

Captain of the synchronised

Swimming team must be looking at his watch,

I am late one more time.



Back in my garden now, after swimming

Fresh Sea breeze and a glorious morning,

I look at the slugs,  snails, bees in busy lizzy

Fragrance of violet Wisteria and the others,

All looking at me, trying to show their colours and beauty,

I stare at them only to see the angelic face of my childhood dream!

Monday, April 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 February 2020

The laughing morning sun, the nature, the birds. wonderful depiction o f nature. childhood, life and how we see the nature. very nice poem. tony

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Such a beautiful poem! Love the poem, especially lines like - " ..compete with the sun....to beat the other one" . The transition from picking flowers in the childhood to Captain of the Synchronized Team looking at his watch - reflects the soft loving emotions depicted in a lyrical language throughout the poem. Thanks.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 30 April 2019

This is a beautiful poem! There are so many lines which touch the heart - I compete with the sun...to beat the other one. The picture of the captain of the synchronized swimming team looking at his watch - is so realistic, yet so poetic! The poet has successfully expressed his feelings for his beloved, and how he relives those moments! Will look forward to read such lovely lines!

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 April 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Ratan Ghosh. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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