Morning Sun Poem by Ratan Ghosh

Morning Sun

Rating: 5.0


The morning sun is smiling at

Me through the window blinds,

It's so sweet and warm

Just like the body of my beloved one.

I should be up and about before I see the sun,

I compete with the sun

Who will get up early

To beat the other one.



I am tempted to turn around

And to stay in bed a little longer,

To enjoy the warmth of the morning sun

Warming my body

A little longer this time.

But the Siuli flowers would wither away

If not picked right in time.

I need to get up before the sun shines.



I hear in my silent heart, wake up, wake up

My angel is already there, looking for me -

Together we are supposed to be there,

Picking the white flowers from the ground under the tree.

Am I dreaming now? half awake, half sleep

Captain of the synchronised

Swimming team must be looking at his watch,

I am late one more time.



Back in my garden now, after swimming

Fresh Sea breeze and a glorious morning,

I look at the slugs,  snails, bees in busy lizzy

Fragrance of violet Wisteria and the others,

All looking at me, trying to show their colours and beauty,

I stare at them only to see the angelic face of my childhood dream!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 February 2020

The laughing morning sun, the nature, the birds. wonderful depiction o f nature. childhood, life and how we see the nature. very nice poem. tony

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Such a beautiful poem! Love the poem, especially lines like - " ..compete with the sun....to beat the other one" . The transition from picking flowers in the childhood to Captain of the Synchronized Team looking at his watch - reflects the soft loving emotions depicted in a lyrical language throughout the poem. Thanks.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 30 April 2019

This is a beautiful poem! There are so many lines which touch the heart - I compete with the sun...to beat the other one. The picture of the captain of the synchronized swimming team looking at his watch - is so realistic, yet so poetic! The poet has successfully expressed his feelings for his beloved, and how he relives those moments! Will look forward to read such lovely lines!

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 April 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Ratan Ghosh. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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