Mortality Poem by Sandra Fowler

Mortality

Rating: 4.9


My friend, I think the sunset knows our names.
Old leaves are whispering them to windowpanes.
A Jew's harp wind plays the elusive dusk.
Blueness comes in like a compelling tide.

The August fingers of the western light
Is writing us into its history book.
You promise me that good-bye will be gold
And glorious as our mortality.

Copyright,2009, Sandra Fowler

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 June 2009

One of the bifid historical themetics of humankind is what man constructs and the other one what the Nature decides for the fate. The olden life seems to be waiting for a dignified end and the path described for it is very well lit in this poem. Best Regards Naseer

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Vinod Kumar 28 June 2009

Wonderfull Mam, thanks,10+

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Wojja Fink 26 June 2009

I can't imagine reading a more beautiful poem. Best wishes John

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Obinna Eruchie 25 June 2009

'My friend, I think the sunset knows our names./ Old leaves are whispering them to windowpanes./ A Jew's harp wind plays the elusive dusk./ Blueness comes in like a compelling tide.' Wonderful poem with vivid imagery especially the lines above.

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wonderful one with so meaningful images...

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Lee Boueri 23 January 2020

Beautiful and sad at the same time Sandra.

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Alison Mary Dunn 12 July 2009

'You promise me that good-bye will be gold And glorious as our mortality'. Sandra, your poem brings great comfort to me, especially at this moment in time. I feel a sense of peace and reassurance that everything is going to be alright <3 reminding me just how wonderful poetry can be to the soul x With great respect, Ally

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Adi Cox 03 July 2009

There is so much depth in your poem. I keep reading it over again and contemplating. Your phrases are thought provoking. To think that a sunset knows your names. This is autumn gold.10/10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 July 2009

ammmmmmazing indeed! .......10+

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premji premji 01 July 2009

Sandraji, you live a poet's life fully.... you are beyond words.......

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