Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 785,572 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Mothers Always - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Mothers always support their children
Don't leave them alone in critical times even
Whatever the case may be
She will make the children to feel free

After attaining comfortable position
We relate incidence with nice composition
It is nice to admit sweet memory
When she is no more with us to feel sorry

As the cycle changes, we move on
From childhood to adulthood we have smoothly gone
There we act differently and behave
Forget about her part as if didn't have

But childhood memory may never fade
As mother never considered this as trade
It was natural bonding and love
She always comforts us when we go to her

Females generally in any form stand with respect
They are caring and kind when time comes to act
It may be natural inheritance for the girl in fact
Where as males behave differently and strongly react

God has given them kind heart
They always remain as inseparable part
Till death they won't leave us for a moment
She has nothing to feel bad about us or resent


Comments about Mothers Always by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Black On Black Arts (2/23/2012 5:06:00 PM)

    very good poem this makes me miss my mother (Report)Reply

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  • Stevens Cadet (2/22/2012 7:03:00 PM)

    We love the Mothers who work hard & show underlying care for their children. Nice piece. Nice topic (Report)Reply

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  • Stevens Cadet (2/22/2012 6:57:00 PM)

    We love our hard-working and caring mothers. Good one (Report)Reply

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  • Michael Williams (2/21/2012 8:19:00 AM)

    God bless Mothers. Mine came down with emphazima and had a hard last 10 yrs. She sold the family business which I did not want and moved to Ala.
    The Doc. gave her less than 6 mnths to live so I am only child, adopted but the bond was like the love of an Angel. I moved with her to be there her last time on the Earth. I am only child cause she could not have Children. I was purchased at 3 mnths old. I went to Ala. then we moved to Fla. She passed recently and worried about me on her death bed she still did all she could to make sure all was well in my life.
    God bless Mothers who are true Mothers.
    If I can figure out how I will make this one of my favorite poems.
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  • Shanice Rodriguez (2/20/2012 7:15:00 PM)

    This is a wonderful poems, very good with your words, I really enjoyed this poem, thank you for inviting me to read this wonderful poem. Good work (Report)Reply

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  • Mandi June (2/20/2012 6:40:00 PM)

    This shows an amazing bond between mother and child, keeping the importance of her kindness and unconditional love. Fabulous! Thank you for sharing your talent with us :) (Report)Reply

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  • (2/19/2012 11:48:00 PM)

    thankyou for inviting me to read your poems. i really enjoy them. you're a great writer :) (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/19/2012 6:01:00 PM)

    Mothers always support their children
    Don’t leave them alone in critical times even
    Whatever the case may be
    She will make the children to feel free
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 19, 2012



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