Ms. Elevator And Mr. Ladder Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Ms. Elevator And Mr. Ladder

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Mr. Ladder you are outdated now,
Why don’t you retire peacefully?
This will help to save your face and grace
with which you worked all these days.

Now time has changed.
People are after money
They count seconds in penny
Who cares to climb step after step
Even to press command button
They feel it’s useless,
why to waste time on silly things.
It takes time to climb with you
Yet you offer free fall with great injuries.
So time has come to say goodbye, Mr. Ladder.

Oh Thanks for this gentle reminder Ms. Elevator,
I admit I am outdated, I agree that nobody wish to use me.
I also agree it’s time and energy consuming, to use me.
Yet do you have any alternate when fire breaks out?
Do you have any alternate when electricity goes- off?
Ms. Elevator you are charming, you save time and energy,
How about health and exercise? ?
My free fall is human error and yours technical?
I am in no mood to retire, especially when I see a board hanging
Which says “ Elevator is out of order, please use stairs”

Thursday, October 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: satire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 08 October 2015

I thoroughly enjoyed this intelligent, witty and well written poem, Mohammed. Very entertaining and wise. Thank you! !

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Poetic Sky 10 September 2020

Great creative piece of poem second in a row today

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Robert Mugobi 10 October 2015

Nice piece Mohammed, I admire your creativity

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M Asim Nehal 10 October 2015

Thank much for honouring my request.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 October 2015

WOW! ! ! ! I really enjoyed reading the dialog between Mr. Ladder and Mr. Elevator.....a great creative write! ! ! ! !

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M Asim Nehal 10 October 2015

Thank u madam, I am happy u liked it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 October 2015

People are after money! And, many things are easily forgotten. Nice piece.

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2015

Thanks much Mr. Edward.

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Loke Kok Yee 08 October 2015

What a humorous write your last line made me fall off my chair! Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2015

Thanks much......LKY

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