Mum Was Right Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Mum Was Right

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Mothers can foretell
If we got the right girl

It is mum's instinctive ability
That she could see reality

My woman I introduced
She thought I was seduced

My sweetheart is pretty
I call her name Kitty

Mum's impulse is negative
Kitty is not a good prerogative

Mum thinks Kitty got the beauty
But lack sense of responsibility

But i still pursued my own desire
Mum's blessing I did not require

After twenty years of marriage
Every day am quite discourage

Kitty has been very immature
Each moment with her is torture

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nina .a. 06 May 2008

I agree with Duncan, It's a strong poem well structured of sorts but u know mum's can be right as much as they can be wrong..u just have to make the best of ur situation learn from it and try to fix it..don't just give up. cheers, Nina x

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Duncan Wyllie 05 May 2008

viewing a situation is impossible unless we can see it from all angles, and as you know, for mortals at least..this is impossible A strong poem none- the- less Love duncan X

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Ivor Hogg 05 May 2008

Mums are not always right Marvin.they think no woman good enough for their son a bit of maternal possessive jealosy enters the equation and can cloud her judgement

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Seema Chowdhury 04 May 2008

Marvin you are right, mum is always right. i agree. don't feel bad, we alwsys learn from our mistakes. i hope you'll get a chance toi reectify your mistake. good lucka nd take care

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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