Times A Wasting Poem by Paul Brookes

A truly impressive piece. Nicely written and well conveyed...10+++

You have so aptly described the dwindling down of time in poetic form. I particularly liked the line about thinking more in the past. Age will do that to us. A wonderful poem that touches the hearts of your readers. Thanks for sharing. : -)

truth is the future is shorter, beginning to think more in the past. yeah, so it's right ' the future just ain't what it used to be' mainly because there is less of it. - - - > love the bite of humor here- -great poem 10++++++++++++++++++++++

The future ain't what it used to be', well the days get longer but the years shorter. the cliched light at the end of the tunnel gets nearer; - - - -> A truism with a bite! ! ! Also love the descriptive " clinched" - only a master wordsmith could have come up that! ! ! !

the days get longer but the years shorter. the cliched light at the end of the tunnel gets nearer;

thank you for your strong feeling and powerful language has used in this lovely work, it is short but deep, well; the Anthology was the main issue that made the philosophers thinking and thinking but they never came out with an answer.. I have enjoyed your meaningful poem,10++