Jim Franckum

My 80% Great Limerick - Poem by Jim Franckum

This poem needs more than just rhyming
It also needs lots of good timing
I know that each line
Must sound mighty fine
Otherwise it's going to be a pretty lousy limerick

Topic(s) of this poem: creativity, example, limerick, writing

Form: Limerick

Comments about My 80% Great Limerick by Jim Franckum

  • Bri Edwards (3/26/2017 8:16:00 PM)

    Kim Barney sent me your way.

    i'll let you add 5% for the alliteration lousy limerick. you may change your title now.

    bri :)

    to MyPoemList.

    are you still on PH?

    bri :)
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  • Kim Barney (11/27/2016 8:30:00 PM)

    My 80% Great Limerick
    I actually laughed out loud at that last line. It took me totally by surprise! This is wonderful! Why hasn't anyone commented on it before? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 3, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 3, 2015

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