My 'Baby' Girl Poem by Selena Star

My 'Baby' Girl

Rating: 5.0


Beautiful little girl
That's what you are
With that cute little curl
Im glad we came this far

You were inside of me
I can't believe this is real
This was mean't to be
And i can't explain how i feel

I love your sweet smile
And that little face you make
It was all worth the while
Like when you awake

Now you are leaving
Leaving me all alone
I know i'll be greiving
But, we can talk on the phone

Beautiful little girl
That's what you are
With that cute little curl
Im glad we came this far


(Written for a Friend)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Red Blooded Black Hearted 16 September 2007

Aw, that poem was beautiful. Keep writing, you're an excellent poet.

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Josie Whitehead 08 September 2007

This is indeed a lovely little poem, but if you added your apostrophes and capital letters, it would turn your poem from good into excellent. Hope you don't mind my saying this (but I always notice these things) .

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i love it! so who was this written to? KEEP DOING THE SWEET JOB! ! ! ~SuNsHiNe ♥

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Meghan R. 08 September 2007

Beautiful poem, I absolutly love this. xox keep wrighting! <33 =) -Meghan Rhy

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