My Beautiful Dream(107) Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

My Beautiful Dream(107)

Rating: 4.8


Oh, There was a cute baby,
With charming and nourishing,
Sweet cheeks, feels like to bite,
Cute red lips like painted with blood.

Sitting on a beautiful greeny lawn,
No one around the child,
Oh swiftly,
From somewhere, somehow,
The gang of butterflies,
With different colours flittred,
Around the cute baby,
There was no one to play with the baby,
Only the butterflies were around to play,
The butterflies flittered around her,
Oh, There was a cute laughing,
Cute eye, trying to clap with cute and small fingers,
Some butterflies started sitting around the lips,
The baby tried to catch the butterflies,
But it was cute to see,
The game between the baby and butterflies.

The butterflies playing with the baby,
Was like,
The little angels were around.

Thursday, September 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written with my beautiful dream I had some days ago,
This dream was true I had on midnight.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 05 September 2019

Mesmerizing the scene of the little cute baby playing with colorful butterflies and enjoying in it's celestial style. A refreshing life song, though in the dream.

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Anjandev Roy 05 September 2019

Delightful poem. Enjoyed it. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Valsa George 12 September 2019

Indeed a lovely dream! A cute little baby and butterflies playing all around. It is a heavenly sight! Any body would cherish such a lovely dream! You have drawn a mesmerizing image!

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Bharati Nayak 11 September 2019

Baby and butterfly, both represent beauty and innocence.They face each other and happy in the company of each other. With environmental pollution butterflies have reduced in numbers and we rarely spot them in cities.Perhaps you long to go back to your childhood days and want to play with butterflies. A lovely poem, thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 September 2019

The dream that you dreamed on midnight is cutely and nicely executed. Each line is lovely and interesting to read. I quote some lines here....From somewhere, somehow, / The gang of butterflies, / With different colours flittred, / Around the cute baby, / There was no one to play with the baby, / Only the utterflies were around to play, Definitely a beautiful poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 September 2019

So wonderful! I loved the baby and all the butterflies dancing around. Ram, this is a beautiful dream.......10

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Savita Tyagi 07 September 2019

It must have been a lovely dream. I can picture a little happy baby with butterflies around on a sunny day. A marvelous picture.

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