Moonlight Poem by Vaibhav Pandey


Rating: 5.0

crawling moonlight along the streets '
venturing heart going to appease
guiding the air with its eternal bliss
dampened love refuses to cease.

Rajaram Ramachandran 05 February 2009

Short and to the point

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Jay P. Narain 05 February 2009

Very nice short poem.

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Denvor Fernandez 07 February 2009


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Chitra - 07 February 2009

a nice one nothing can stall love

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 February 2009

moonlight still reminds the love as when it enligtens heart by mystery, nicely wrought ingenious,10+, thanks for sharing

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Shashendra Amalshan 08 August 2009

This is a very soothing one to read.. nice indeed Vaibhav, .. I m never being good at short and concise.. This is short, yet great.... love shan

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fleur de lys 28 July 2009

Young man you make me feel like retiring my pen...

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Yelena M. 12 April 2009

The magic and music of the night and moon inspired by an exquisite emotion from the depth of your heart.Good poetry cleverly uses words, excellent poetry does the same but goes somewhere beyond words, into the profoundity of the soul, too, like yours. Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Vaibhav. A.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 10 March 2009

wow......short and peaceful....thank you.

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Lucas Akkadian 08 March 2009

This is not lengthy, yet really thoughtful. I think it's great that you associated the moonlight with struggling love. I visualize myself having had yet another late night fight with my spouse/lover and taking a long night time walk to clear my head, only to realize that despite the stress I only love the person more. This is a great write.

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