crawling moonlight along the streets '
venturing heart going to appease
guiding the air with its eternal bliss
dampened love refuses to cease.
Short and to the point
Very nice short poem.
a nice one nothing can stall love
moonlight still reminds the love
as when it enligtens heart by mystery, nicely wrought ingenious,10+, thanks for sharing
This is a very soothing one to read..
nice indeed Vaibhav, .. I m never being good at short and concise..
This is short, yet great....
Young man you make me feel like retiring my pen...
The magic and music of the night and moon inspired by an exquisite emotion from the depth of your heart.Good poetry cleverly uses words, excellent poetry does the same but goes somewhere beyond words, into the profoundity of the soul, too, like yours.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Vaibhav.
wow......short and peaceful....thank you.
This is not lengthy, yet really thoughtful.
I think it's great that you associated the moonlight with struggling love.
I visualize myself having had yet another late night fight with my spouse/lover and
taking a long night time walk to clear my head,
only to realize that despite the stress I only love the person more.
This is a great write.
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