My Darling -02 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

My Darling -02

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Like in the past,
today's morning Sun
paints vermilion
on the forehead of the sky.


But alas, you're no more eager
nowhere near today, here
to put vermilion in my name
on your forehead with love.

This is a translation of the poem ସଖୀ-02 (Sakhi_02)/Odia Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra
Sunday, December 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desert,desire,friendship,loneliness,longing,love and friendship,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sakhi is a term used in all Indian epics and literature, Radha in the adolescence and Draupadi in his youth happened to betwo Sakhis of lord SriKrisna a loving term to address the beloved girl friend.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonali Parida 04 December 2017

Like in the past, today's morning Sun paints vermilion on the forehead of the sky. A poem rich in love and great passion. 10++++

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Mayurakshi Ojha 04 December 2017

on the forehead of the sky. A poem rich in love and great passion. 10+++

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Prativa Rani 04 December 2017

today's morning Sun paints vermilion on the forehead of the sky. A poem rich in love and great passion. 10+

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D Priyanka Singh 04 December 2017

Like in the past, today's morning Sun paints vermilion on the forehead of the sky. A poem rich in love and great passion. 10++++

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D Priyanka Singh 04 December 2017

Like in the past, today's morning Sun paints vermilion on the forehead of the sky. A poem rich in love and great passion. 10++++ DP

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 20 January 2018

Like in the past, today's morning Sun paints vermilion on the forehead of the sky.thanks for shearing a nice poem what a nice poem sir I love this poem 10++++++

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

But alas, you're no more eager nowhere near today, here to put vermilion in my name on your forehead with love. What a nice poem sir, Love it. 10++++ for the sharing. 10++++ DP

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

But alas, you're no more eager nowhere near today, here to put vermilion in my name on your forehead with love. Wow, what a sweet poem composed here. Thanks for sharing it. 10+++++

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Alina Kaikeyi 05 December 2017

on the forehead of the sky. A poem rich in love and great passion. 10+ Alina

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Alina Kaikeyi 05 December 2017

on the forehead of the sky. A poem rich in love and great passion. 10+

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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