My Darling - 01 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

My Darling - 01

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To which world
Did you flee my darling?
So sudden, off me,
My sphere of life,

Whose attraction,
Which dream, and what
Great craving was it that
Snatched you from me?


For whom was
In this heart
So much love,
So intense affinity,
An eternal stream of
Profound affections,

Whose cursed look
Did burn all this world
Of my dreams and desires? ?

This is a translation of the poem ସଖୀ-01 (Sakhi_01) /Odia Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra
Monday, December 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desert,desire,friendship,loneliness,longing,love and friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sakhi is a term used in all Indian epics and literature, Radha in the adolescence and Draupadi in his youth happened to betwo Sakhis of lord SriKrisna a loving term to address the beloved girl friend.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 04 December 2017

Whose cursed look Did burn all this world Of my dreams and desires? ? 10+++

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Sonali Parida 04 December 2017

Whose cursed look Did burn all this world Of my dreams and desires? ? The pain of separation caused due to a cursed look, nice poem. 10++++

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Sonali Parida 04 December 2017

To which world Did you flee my darling? So sudden, off me, My sphere of life, A great translation of the lovely poem Sakhi. 10+++

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Mayurakshi Ojha 04 December 2017

Did burn all this world Of my dreams and desires? ? The pain of separation caused due to a cursed look, nice poem. 10+++

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Prativa Rani 04 December 2017

Whose cursed look Did burn all this world Of my dreams and desires? ? The pain of separation caused due to a cursed look, nice poem. 10

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

Whose attraction, Which dream, and what Great craving was it that Snatched you from me? Lovely lines, quite enjoyable poem. 10+++ DP

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

Whose attraction, Which dream, and what Great craving was it that Snatched you from me? Lovely lines, quite enjoyable poem. 10+++

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Alina Kaikeyi 05 December 2017

Whose cursed look Did burn all this world Of my dreams and desires? ? 10 Alina

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Alina Kaikeyi 05 December 2017

Whose cursed look Did burn all this world Of my dreams and desires? ? 10

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Anita Aparajita Das 04 December 2017

Whose cursed look Did burn all this world Of my dreams and desires? ? The pain of separation caused due to a cursed look, nice poem 10+++++ Neetu

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