My Deep Sleep.. Poem by adheez van der beanthz

My Deep Sleep..

Rating: 4.3


My deep sleep..
here, we meet
flung the stuffy hesitated
to the longing smile that embarrassed

my deep sleep..
might it be you?
could you be real?
and all become clear

my deep sleep..
finally have to go forward
leave everything into the sorrow of heart
although reluctant to confess

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 25 July 2013

Many of us have have dreamed of something or someone that we wished to be reality. Then on the other hand they can be terrifying that we are happy that it was only just a dream. Hope this one comes true. Very deep and solemn write.

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Ramesh Rai 17 June 2013

beautiful compose. liked it

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Owain Glyn 12 June 2013

It is often the case that sleep is not only a comfort but also the place where the deepest wishes become manifest.

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