Thursday, January 17, 2008

My Dream Girl Comments

Rating: 4.4

Her hair as dark as coal
Her eyes see deep in your soul
Her voice so soft and tender
Will put a grown man in a slumber
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Anthony Yorke
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 17 November 2014

A good imaginations about the beauty of the dream girl and it is a success.

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Rajnish Manga 17 November 2014

The beauty of the poem lies in the poet's description of the beauty of the dream girl. It seems that the girl is sitting in front of the poet. We only hope that he muster up the strength to go from one corner of the world to the other to trace his dream girl.

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Bernard Snyder 17 November 2014

Nice poem. Great imagination. Congrats!

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Kim Barney 17 November 2014

Nice poem, but it was also chosen as poem of the day on November 17,2012 and November 17,2013. Poem Hunter, please have some of your humans (if you have any at the website) actually read some of the recent poems and start choosing new ones for poem of the day instead of letting your computers do it. |

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 November 2014

A praise of beauty what is called in Urdu- Ghazal so beautiful :)

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Liliana ~el 17 November 2013

Love that last stanza. Very nice had me thinking Thanks

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Babatunde Aremu 17 November 2012

Dreams are real sometimes. You can have her if you desire to turn the dream to reality. Great write, I like it

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Sallam Yassin 17 November 2012

dreams may come true so to find her look through the heart with your inner sight may she close then ever

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Gillian Commerford 17 November 2012

Liked it and will read more of your poems

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Ramesh Rai 18 November 2011

this is one of the most beautiful poem.

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Shannon Wright 17 January 2008

i love this, thanks for sharing. -shannon

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John Nightingale 17 January 2008

I think this is a fine bittersweet poem. Thanks.

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